"With a wild rattle and clatter, and an inhuman abandonment of consideration not easy to be understood in these days, the carriage dashed through streets and swept around corners, with women screaming before it, and men clutching each other and clutching children out of its way. At last, swooping at a street corner by a fountain, one of its wheels came to a sickening little jolt, and there was a loud cry from a number of voices, and the horses reared and plunged."
In previous chapters, I was always confused on what was happening, but this paragraph, and even other parts of this chapter made a lot of sense to me. The verbs and adjectives that were used made it much easier for me to understand exactly how the carriage was moving through the streets, how the people were reacting, and for me, the end of this paragraph helped me understand how horrible the accident was, even though we don't know much about it at this point. 'Dashed, swept, and swooping,' are all words that explain the carriage, and 'clutching, screaming, and cry,' all explain the people's reactions. It is obvious that the carriage is moving too fast and that all of the pedestrians out on the streets are terrified.
The one sentence, however, that evoked the most emotion in me, was: "one of its wheels came to a sickening little jolt, and there was a loud cry..." The word choice here seems very dark and it seems as though Dickens, once again, wants us to feel the pain that the victims in this scene are feeling. Dickens is fantastic at bringing emotion to the reader and at using word choice to help the reader better understand what is going on.
katie, i agree that sometimes Dickens writing can be confusing. I often think that he is just rambling on about something irrelevant to the main point of the scene or passage. I also think that he did a good job "showing" what was happening in this scene and that it was violent, dark, and somewhat scary.
ReplyDeleteI agree, I too have wondered what exactly has been going on in some parts of the book. With Dicken’s writing it is hard to sometimes picture in your head what is going on. When I read this passage carefully I was actually able to picture in my head what was going on with the carriage and the crash. Also, the descriptive words Dickens uses helps the reader form that picture in their mind. -Tori
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ReplyDeleteI agree that dickens writing can be confusing, but for me the biggest problem is that I tend to just stop trying to picture a passage that i do not understand. My mind then tends to wander and i stop paying attention meaning i have to reread.
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I completely agree. I don't think I have ever understood Dickens as clearly as I did during this passage. Maybe there's a reason for that. I think that maybe Dickens wrote this more clearly to really have it stand out against the rest of the text. Either way, the word choice and writing in this passage is excellent.
ReplyDeleteTerrific post, Katie. Bolding the key words was such a great idea for drawing your reader's eye towards those descriptive words.
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